Is your homepage clear at first glance?

Send me your homepage and I’ll show you the first changes I would make across both messaging and design.

What arrives

Inside your PDF, I mark what I would change at the top of your page and why, with example wording or visual direction where it helps.

I review the page on desktop and mobile, then annotate whichever view shows the changes most clearly.

Scope

One public homepage, opening section only. Not a full homepage review, a finished redesign, or an implementation.

Robert Hacala

Reviewed by

Robert Hacala

Senior Creative Director

Over 24 years, I've built and led creative teams and run business and design operations. That work has spanned organizations from creative studios to tech startups to a fast-growing publicly listed holding company. I've also helped dozens of founders and small businesses build strategic brands and visual identities.

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